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quick picture to work on lines and color use
this is Mariecruz...she is the little sister of Valerie Veritas..
both a mexican and live seperated in the states. her parents moved away with her because they thought Val had a bad influence on her. she is probably about 14 and goes to a catholic schoool for girls. what she doesn't know is.. that she is going to awake... she is a Garou... a werewolf. her older sister Val and Mariecruz did only hear about creatures like that from the tellings of their grandfather ~Abuelo
who told them stories about the "Nahuales"
part of the OTE roleplaygame
enjoy~
this is Mariecruz...she is the little sister of Valerie Veritas..
both a mexican and live seperated in the states. her parents moved away with her because they thought Val had a bad influence on her. she is probably about 14 and goes to a catholic schoool for girls. what she doesn't know is.. that she is going to awake... she is a Garou... a werewolf. her older sister Val and Mariecruz did only hear about creatures like that from the tellings of their grandfather ~Abuelo
who told them stories about the "Nahuales"part of the OTE roleplaygame
enjoy~
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I definately enjoy the way the piece has its own personality, and the colors you used really helped with that. However there are a few things that are bothering me.
1) (This is the one that bothers me the most.)
The eye on the right is a little too far over; generally it would be correct to have the eyes about one eye width apart, but because of the angle the nose and mouth are at it creates an awkward space. One way to fix this without changing the eyes would be to put the nose and mouth at a slight angle. IE: instead of having the mouth and nose line up like " l " have them line up like " / ".
2) The sketchyness of the lines doesn't seem to fit the personality of the piece, however since this is just a practice it's really no big deal. One thing you could do to fix the lines would be to create the lines in a seperate layer then make another layer where you do all the line work with as few lines as possible. Then just either hide or delete the old layer with the sketchy lines.
Good job on the hair and the hairline btw.
1) (This is the one that bothers me the most.)
The eye on the right is a little too far over; generally it would be correct to have the eyes about one eye width apart, but because of the angle the nose and mouth are at it creates an awkward space. One way to fix this without changing the eyes would be to put the nose and mouth at a slight angle. IE: instead of having the mouth and nose line up like " l " have them line up like " / ".2) The sketchyness of the lines doesn't seem to fit the personality of the piece, however since this is just a practice it's really no big deal. One thing you could do to fix the lines would be to create the lines in a seperate layer then make another layer where you do all the line work with as few lines as possible. Then just either hide or delete the old layer with the sketchy lines.
Good job on the hair and the hairline btw.